Review Detail of GreenSamurai in There was the sunset

This review is after the first chapter. The writing quality is great, nothing is taking me out of the story. Except the wall of exposition at the beginning. It did flesh out the world quickly, but i prefer a slower introduction to a world that keeps the reader wanting more. But I did not dock points for my personal taste. I don't like romance myself and probably won't read more. But if you do like the tags I say give it a shot.