Review Detail of Gaburieru in There was the sunset

Item: There was the sunset
Rating: 4.8

Review detail

GaburieruLv33yrGaburieru

A very interesting concept of a fallen angel. The writing is good but I would like to see more spaces between thoughts and some large paragraphs broken up! Other than that great start!

There was the sunset

CalypsoDay

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CalypsoDayAuthorCalypsoDay

Thank you for your appreciation. Already working on my paragraphs' spacing. Hopefully, it will improve! Thank you!

3yr