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2021-04-10 20:45

Hopefully this story gets chosen so I can continue enjoying it. The flow of the story is smooth, the characters are likeable, the plot of the story is brilliant and innovative. I was pulled into the story as soon as I started reading, the descriptive words make it easy for anyone to picture what is happening.

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