Review Detail of Mel_Aniv in King of the east universe
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This story has potential by the way. But at least make it more lengthy or don't come short below 800 words. I recommend it to have between 1.5 to 800 words to make the flow of the story to be slower and its pacing will improve. What I do to mine was don't fall on 1000 words. But hey! your story is so awesome! A big wave of readers will come for your novel in the future!
King of the east universe
samadetuyi
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You are welcome! I wished to improve my review to yours, it was so hard to see it from my view now. Maybe I will make a better one? Sorry for putting it in the review, but I wanted to at least say my advice to you. Hope you take it nicely. đ
samadetuyi:thxs for the advice