See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

this book is actually quite good if the author ever picks this book up again I am confident that it will be a gem in webnovel so pls author pick the book up

the story is very captivating I suggest you read it because it is good and very interesting it has a little humour in it which is good so read the boom

the world building is good

we need to know the mc name and also you should be uploading very often but apart from that little mistake I am liking the story you should explain the world like if there are more people in the world that has powers

thxs for the advice

suggestion noted

this is a good book