Review Detail of Aysel_Inara in The Obstruction Of Balance

- No punctuation at various places. - Character development is kind of odd when MC wakes up. - The initial chapter has no hook (although I still read up to a few chaps.) - The POVs aren't separated from each other . - Unnecessary capitalization. Only one place was accurate. - Separate the speech & description. - Although I liked the beasts and apocalyptic arrival. - Pace is extremely fast and underdeveloped. - And the 'evil within one' theme was good too. - Lastly synopsis needs a change, it should portray insights if the story. I just got a vague sole idea that the MC is troubling anti-hero.