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shv_luffy98Lv53yr
2021-05-11 06:13

read upto chapter 400 in mtl.. novel is nice, but I don't know why the author has to rip off every minor details from wbma.. in some places it's soo unnecessary.. makes it feel like the author dissected wbma and some other novels (brick smashing totally reminds me of tmw) n mash em up together badly.. story is nice but the unnecessary forceful elements copied from wbma just leaves a bad taste.. for eg.. in wbma.. martial arts competition being made available for the public viewing was mentioned as new government policies to promote martial arts.. whereas in this novel you get to know it about half way through the competition when the scene gets brutal.. as if the author suddenly remember "ah I can add this part here" for people who read wbma if you can tolerate these things the story is kinda good.. with a similarly shameless mc and makes it feel like a different skin for wbma

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Kaitlyn_CatsLv1

whats wbma? and tmw?

UnchainedxLv5

Wbma = World’s Best Martial Artist Tmw = True martial world I think that's it...

Kaitlyn_Cats:whats wbma? and tmw?
Peace12345Lv5

I know this is late but the story he ripped ideas from the most is actually Swallowed Star.

SkyheliosLv14

yep, especially the virtual world

Peace12345:I know this is late but the story he ripped ideas from the most is actually Swallowed Star.
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