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nvanattia
nvanattiaLv142yr
2022-11-27 09:52

The first 40 chapters are not bad. There is a lot to be wanted for sure, but they are readable. Once you get past chapter 40 that all goes away. As others have said, the translation is horrible and it looks like the story starts to fall apart. I can't tell you what to do, but if you want to waste 2 FP per chapter like I did, go ahead. I am putting this out there so others don't make that mistake out of curiosity.

Starting With A Space Battleship

Silence Doesn't Mean Low-Key
3.6
613 Chs

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Bored_into_sub
Bored_into_subLv4

but FR June is a guy, yet, they keep using female pronouns on him, and then swapping back, and it's not just June, it's every character

2yr
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Grandmist_Sage
Grandmist_SageLv11

petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................

4yr

InHisName
InHisNameLv6

This MC is just sad. He gets betrayed by his girlfriend who he wished to marry. His father was brutally killed by scum of society. He gets scammed by capitalist bussiness owners on frequent basis. When he pleads innocent to bystanders and police they never believe him. And his family survives on scraps. Yet this MC still preaches about the goodness of humanity. What's with this faulty characterisation? A person who went through so much in life can't possibly be a virtuous, upright, person. Did I mention this MC dies in a game which somehow mysteriously transmigrates his soul back in time? Implying that being killed in a game, killed him in real life too. What is this? SAO? This story has more plot holes than swiss cheese.

4yr
radude4411
radude4411Lv15

Give me more scifi! Mama needs her spaceships🔥 give me more scifi! Mama needs her 🚀 spaceships. Please webnovel pick this one! I NEED IT!!!!!

4yr
smithnj
smithnjLv11

TD:LR: Hidden machine translated novel for double the price of original works. While a tad dry read for the first 40 chapters with some weird plot holes and hypocrisy, at chapter 41 the editor stopped caring and the story becomes a mess. Not to mention it costs 2 passes for a single chapter. I spent those 2 passes just to verify what others have said and read the 40 chapters to make a fair review. If you're going to be a scammer with machine translated novels, be up front about it. Otherwise you get the 1-star review.

2yr
UnknownRose
UnknownRoseLv3

When I read the description, I feel like the novel is kind like LORD OF MYSTERIES and I really like it💓👍💓👍💓👍💓👍💓👍💓👍💓👍💓👍💓👍💓👍💓👍

4yr
Pleades
PleadesLv2

Free chapter were edited to make it look good...after chapter 40 it became bad very fast...no editing at all...just mtl....just delete your translation group its just trash...you should be ashamed of yourself for doing such a bad job

2yr
BlackRabbitz135
BlackRabbitz135Lv14

Translation turned to trash after 40 chapters

2yr
SnowreD
SnowreDLv12

Garbage translation. The fact that some names aren't even capitalized after the free chapter are over should say enough.

2yr
Bloodmoot
BloodmootLv15

Dropped at chapter 70. Writing quality becomes horrendous after chapter 40. Gender pronouns constantly messed up. Names translated several different ways so you never know who is talking. Sentences occasionally being complete nonsense. Paragraphs will occasionally miss punctuation entirely. So you dont know if someone is talking or thinking. It's just confusing and hard to read. Not to mention zero information is given on world back ground. That includes the game world. then there is the newbie characters able to get equipment/mechs that one shot God like beings. I really tried but it is very hard to enjoy in its current state. Needs an editor desperately. Then maybe a chapter or two added to the beginning dedicated to building the real world and game world. Maybe the MC history.

2yr
LazyDeath
LazyDeathLv6

1) translations after 40 sucks. 2) it takes 2 tickets to unlock a trash translation chapter. 3) since it's like this I can only say good bye.

2yr
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