Item: Starting With A Space Battleship
Rating: 1
Author: smithnj

smithnjLv112yr

2022-11-02 09:08

TD:LR: Hidden machine translated novel for double the price of original works. While a tad dry read for the first 40 chapters with some weird plot holes and hypocrisy, at chapter 41 the editor stopped caring and the story becomes a mess. Not to mention it costs 2 passes for a single chapter. I spent those 2 passes just to verify what others have said and read the 40 chapters to make a fair review. If you're going to be a scammer with machine translated novels, be up front about it. Otherwise you get the 1-star review.

Starting With A Space Battleship

Silence Doesn't Mean Low-Key

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I'm lucky(?) to get this as a free trial read. his ship doesn't come out till ch 60. and google still can't translate Chinese gender words. so everyone is both he and she depending on their actions

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