It's almost amazing how these authors can come up with interesting concepts, and then turn them into complete trash, especially by trying to use "comedy". The MC is worthless and has almost no agency, just getting carried along by every single other character. He had one decent idea, put a plan into motion, accomplished his goal, and then let all of that success be taken away by everyone around him because he's an idiot. Even that could be forgiven if at any point the story had elicited even a single half-hearted chuckle out of sheer pity, but it couldn't even manage that. It's almost painful to read this story with how bad everything is, with the single exception of the MC's sister who had potential to be a bright spot in this wasteland, but then was dragged into the same garbage sabotaging of the MC like everyone else. It's been a while since I've seen an MC so worthless that I wish they'd just drink a gallon of drain cleaner, but in this case it would actually help him, so of course it won't happen.
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bruh you sure you read the same novel I did?....
thank you thank you thank you all your points about the mc I agree with completely
just read the raws and u will understand the reason .
I could have told you all of that from the stupid synopsis. almost without exception, all the novels that go for "comedy" do so because the authors can't write a coherent, plausible plot. tales of herding gods is the only example of a great novel that uses comedy correctly that comes to mind.
Well I’ll just wait for someone to copy the same concept and make a better novel.
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Thanks for the heads up. Can't srand worthless mc
