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Brezer
BrezerLv144yr
2021-04-16 20:14

the story is annoying. so if he cultivates he loses strength etc but if he lazes or smokes he gets stronger and the dumbest so far is if he eats he gets hungrier..... so don't eat and you stay full? makes no sense. at the start he has a teacher that rides him kicks him out if class but then makes him come back and forces him to move in with him. story is a waste.

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thewayofKABOOMMMMM
thewayofKABOOMMMMMLv14

that's the interesting thing about the story it's not your conventional cultivation story, let's be real no one like those anymore

IAmGod
IAmGodLv14

If he does not eat for days he will die from over eating

Brezer
BrezerLv14

it sounds good but reading it was just annoying .

thewayofKABOOMMMMM:that's the interesting thing about the story it's not your conventional cultivation story, let's be real no one like those anymore
Wabbly
WabblyLv3

in general you are not wrong but this feels like the author is bucking the trend for the sake of bucking the trend. instead of doing something unique for this specific story

thewayofKABOOMMMMM:that's the interesting thing about the story it's not your conventional cultivation story, let's be real no one like those anymore
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