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ERITO_SENSEI
ERITO_SENSEILv113yr
2021-04-13 14:10

i like this book cause it has a serious mc which is not a pervert and has some morals and a brain. Character development is awesome. Writing quality is also not bad. abd most importantly it got nice skills geez i am waiting for mc to get new sss ranked stuff to buff him. To sum up everything i like this story and can gurantee it will not make you bored. o(〃＾▽＾〃)o thanking author for such a nice story. I will help this book grow.

I Got An SSS-Grade Unique Skill 'Extreme Luck' As My Starter Skill!

Khier
4.5
60 Chs

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Khier
KhierAuthor

Ohh Thanks! ^ _ ^

3yr
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Zoron_Mind
Zoron_MindLv1

Are you high?????????? I mean I thought it was established that the MC is undeserving of what he has and is extremely shortsighted that many novels with good plots nowadays make the MC so internally stupid I mean when youre powerful and have an op skill/Item that nobody knows about and when youre fully capable of going solo MC goes with a team for no reason and MC is confident for no reason except author just knows I mean how does he know that nobody is going to get the lotto...He is extremely shortsighted and thinks everything is in his control even though he has no control whatsoever about pretty much everything and Author makes him like somebody with morals in a world where people want to be enslaved. This would be a EXTREMELY good story if the MC was a solo adventure that shocked everybody in the kingdom because he can contest with all the guilds or something and meanwhile you can make him go on adventures and put common cliches like the MC sawing a princess Just Saying

3yr
ERITO_SENSEI
ERITO_SENSEILv11

well.....for a person who wants to see a nice slice of life story like you. i am just here to enjoy overpowered stupidity with a sense of 'control' which most books cant show much properly. Everyone even i have their own thoughts on how a story can be improved just like you but u have to understand that....... you may have your own likings and thoughts but its almost different for different people . its upto you to enjoy these stuff or find mistakes in it. i like it so i support it....if you don't then atleast don't say other people 'high' cause people reading it mostly don't want slice of life stuff they need ridiculous overpowered beings and skills.

Zoron_Mind:Are you high?????????? I mean I thought it was established that the MC is undeserving of what he has and is extremely shortsighted that many novels with good plots nowadays make the MC so internally stupid I mean when youre powerful and have an op skill/Item that nobody knows about and when youre fully capable of going solo MC goes with a team for no reason and MC is confident for no reason except author just knows I mean how does he know that nobody is going to get the lotto...He is extremely shortsighted and thinks everything is in his control even though he has no control whatsoever about pretty much everything and Author makes him like somebody with morals in a world where people want to be enslaved. This would be a EXTREMELY good story if the MC was a solo adventure that shocked everybody in the kingdom because he can contest with all the guilds or something and meanwhile you can make him go on adventures and put common cliches like the MC sawing a princess Just Saying
3yr
ERITO_SENSEI
ERITO_SENSEILv11

tho your thoughts are nice but its upto the author to write the way he wants friend.....please don't mind

Zoron_Mind:Are you high?????????? I mean I thought it was established that the MC is undeserving of what he has and is extremely shortsighted that many novels with good plots nowadays make the MC so internally stupid I mean when youre powerful and have an op skill/Item that nobody knows about and when youre fully capable of going solo MC goes with a team for no reason and MC is confident for no reason except author just knows I mean how does he know that nobody is going to get the lotto...He is extremely shortsighted and thinks everything is in his control even though he has no control whatsoever about pretty much everything and Author makes him like somebody with morals in a world where people want to be enslaved. This would be a EXTREMELY good story if the MC was a solo adventure that shocked everybody in the kingdom because he can contest with all the guilds or something and meanwhile you can make him go on adventures and put common cliches like the MC sawing a princess Just Saying
3yr
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Khier
KhierAuthor

Hi there, shameless author here, just wanna brief you before you read this novel.. First and foremost, the development of character (specifically level), can be fast or slow at times..., second, theres the concept of magic here so please dont apply your sh** common sense here, lastly the updates depends on power stone accumulated.. more power stone = faster update. Thats all, Thanks!

3yr

FATHER_OF_LOLIS
FATHER_OF_LOLISLv4

The MC's not lucky enough to be as awesome as me. But that's normal, I'm unique and rare. Go for it author, no matter what development the novel will be. I'll support you!

3yr
Buggy_The_Clown
Buggy_The_ClownLv3

Extreme luck my ass...... **t NOBODY IS MORE LUCKY THAN ME!!! Buggy-sama

3yr
Daoist814941
Daoist814941Lv11

the main character is very dull. he gets distracted easily and even though he is given a golden opportunity the things he acts on make me want to pound my head into the ground. there is no planning, no patience, and no higher level thinking. what most books on this site seem to be

3yr
HalfX
HalfXLv3

Hmm, interesting.. reminds Blessed God Of War.. The updates are good.. I guess when it begins it will always be fast. Hopefully it will stay Stable.. I can't say to much about character design, story development and world background with only 3 chapters.. Also the grammar is good.

3yr
DaNepz
DaNepzLv5

Pretty good so far keEp up the work.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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RedRossy
RedRossyLv14

if your into novels live solo leveling and op mc this is for you!!! i just love the way author writes and the story development is so good... worth reading!! *w*

3yr
IAmALazyIdiot
IAmALazyIdiotLv1

I recommend to you to make the world more fantasy-like flying fortress, different races, more kingdoms, empires, powerful power levels, large monsters, cool depictions of monster and names It can make the novel unique and not so bland hoping the author continues his writing love iyong KAIGAN

3yr
vv_vv_6584
vv_vv_6584Lv1

FEEDBACK Author you spam the exclamation mark too much, making it lose meaning and the book having a weird feel Due to the nature of the world and method of power gaining it makes it feel like power gained by the MC is underserved. Grammar and spelling is very good for a book on this site

3yr
Kais_Imperium
Kais_ImperiumLv4

!!!**AUTHOR READ THIS FEEDBACK**!!! I like the fact that the MC gets stronger fast, I get burned out nowadays when powerups take forever to do. There isn't much character and world-building yet but the novel only has like 27 chapters currently so that's kinda expected. Author-san/nim/Kun, keep up the updates and I will feed you my stones, Also you should stop power leveling mc too fast because you're going to hit a writer's block when you realize that you screwed up and made way too OP in a time too early. So, I will give you some advice from the wisdom I gained from reading 300+ books on Webnovel( I have read more on other sites) and finishing 150+ of them, that you should focus on the character and world development first rather than going straight to power leveling mc. Currently, we as the readers don't know anything about our protagonist other than some pieces of information (e,g has no family) and we also don't know enough about the world and how it works and the logic behind it, you don't have to explain everything but give us a good description of some things so we can understand the world and mc better. World and character building is very important and should be done early in because when we (readers) read a new novel, we are like a blank slate, we don't know much about what we should expect and have no clue about the stories world and its characters. Every story is a world of its own (even fanfiction) so when we (readers) start a new novel we are metaphorically 'entering' the world that the author is building for us and is guiding us (readers) through the world and characters that they have created with their own hands. So if the world or character building is messed up then even if it has a good plot, or is interesting, it won't last long or go far. If you have read a Wuxia/ Xianxianovel then you probably know that having a good foundation is ABSOLUTELY important for cultivation or else you won't be able to go far or have enough strength, and that's what World/ character building is, the foundation of your story. So If the foundation was damaged or ruined then you can say goodbye to your cultivation/novel. SO KEEP THAT IN MIND!!!! I hate to see it when a good and interesting story gets ruined because the author messed up and rushed it without properly taking time and slowly building the novel, I have encountered this dozens of times, and each time it leaves me in a bitter mood because sometimes I genuinely enjoy reading some novels but they are just ruined because the author rushed or skipped the important parts that should have been made correctly and properly explained. I sincerely hope that you read this and take more time and consideration because I really don't want another novel with good prospects to join my 'abandoned' pile that I have formed from several years of reading novels, stories, books, and such.

3yr
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