when I first read that trash you call a novel I went into a coma from reading the first chapter it is dodo water you trash yo novel trash and you lame
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LIKESorry, Mr. Author but this guy is somewhat correct. Not to insult you but you made your MC too good to be true. I wanted to puke after reading the first few chapters and I still feel sick. I won't write review or do more than put this comment here but... for me, this is 3/5 just because you made your MC into some kind of unreally naive goodie-two-shoes. (Yeah, wouldn't really give you less than 3 stars because even though I REALLY hate this kind of hypocrisy you are practicing here, the overall writing quality is good.)