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S_O_R_A
S_O_R_ALv153yr
2021-10-18 21:24

Basically the title of the novel itself, as well as the second Male Lead, and the Female Lead becomes pointless After 300+ once she gets raped in fall in love with the original ML. Not only does he have an affair in the beginning, and rapes her in her sleep, but he gets no punishment and have a kid with her. While the Female Lead somehow loses all the brain cells she has and fall in love with someone She once thought Was annoying. The second ML who is the Main ML becomes a background round Simp, and only gets her in the end after the original ML dies saving The FL😭😭 the character Development is horrible

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CharlatanKlein
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*Author please notice me umu* What a mood. I actually stopped reading when I sensed that Charlton and Serena were about to break up. I planned to read after some time so I don't have to wait for updates in the break up period. I returned and now I see this. From the very start that I took a glimpse of this novel I already shipped Charlton and Serena. Meaning, that's what I came here for, Even the synopsis seemed to imply the ML being Charlton, but in the end? I am already feeling the angst and I haven't even read the whole novel yet and I am already feeling hurt just knowing how Charlton and Serena's relationship turned out. I don't want to feel this much angst anymore. I've already learned from a different novel in WN called "The Genius' First Love", that novel was just (ofmg)... So yea, I don't think I am going to continue reading this novel, sorry author-san... Here goes my opinion on the spoilers... I recommend to author-san: Since this is the development the author wanted (according to the spoiler), author-san should've just started the book from Geoffrey's death. If so, maybe it would have lesser drama and angst-feels for the readers... The development could be like this: The period where she had a relationship with Charlton would be a hidden past; the time when Geoffrey forced himself on her would also be a hidden past, These would then be memories to be slowly uncovered to the readers as the story progresses. With this, the readers are spared from angst, especially readers that support the Charlton and Serena's ship. Or so this is my opinion being one of the people that ships them T-T <///3 P.S. I honestly wish for there to be a tag or warning for novels with such development. Do you guys know how it feels when the you're "trying to read" until the end—no matter how much angst the novel has—only because you have that one tread of hope on your imagination, only for it to be crushed... I don't see it as a "mysterious" plotline with a an unknown and a very "unexpected twist", I see such stories as harsh-cold plot development </3

champilyn
champilynAuthor

Hallo, thank you for the suggestion. When I started writing I knew that Geoffrey would do something drastic but i was not decided on what he would do, he was madly in love with her and to do nothing was just lame. initially i thought of charlton beating geoffrey as is but that was just weird too. He was the original male lead and the crown prince. he wont just lose easily. So the only way for him to do so was if Serena affects him in a way. Meanwhile the reason serena gets to beat emily the orig fl was because she was a transmigrator. I think the plot twist and geoffrey in the picture was beautifully done. It makes a lot of sense. Anyhow, hope you will read this one someday.

CharlatanKlein:*Author please notice me umu* What a mood. I actually stopped reading when I sensed that Charlton and Serena were about to break up. I planned to read after some time so I don't have to wait for updates in the break up period. I returned and now I see this. From the very start that I took a glimpse of this novel I already shipped Charlton and Serena. Meaning, that's what I came here for, Even the synopsis seemed to imply the ML being Charlton, but in the end? I am already feeling the angst and I haven't even read the whole novel yet and I am already feeling hurt just knowing how Charlton and Serena's relationship turned out. I don't want to feel this much angst anymore. I've already learned from a different novel in WN called "The Genius' First Love", that novel was just (ofmg)... So yea, I don't think I am going to continue reading this novel, sorry author-san... Here goes my opinion on the spoilers... I recommend to author-san: Since this is the development the author wanted (according to the spoiler), author-san should've just started the book from Geoffrey's death. If so, maybe it would have lesser drama and angst-feels for the readers... The development could be like this: The period where she had a relationship with Charlton would be a hidden past; the time when Geoffrey forced himself on her would also be a hidden past, These would then be memories to be slowly uncovered to the readers as the story progresses. With this, the readers are spared from angst, especially readers that support the Charlton and Serena's ship. Or so this is my opinion being one of the people that ships them T-T <///3 P.S. I honestly wish for there to be a tag or warning for novels with such development. Do you guys know how it feels when the you're "trying to read" until the end—no matter how much angst the novel has—only because you have that one tread of hope on your imagination, only for it to be crushed... I don't see it as a "mysterious" plotline with a an unknown and a very "unexpected twist", I see such stories as harsh-cold plot development </3
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Alcelinia
AlceliniaLv11

well said..

CharlatanKlein:*Author please notice me umu* What a mood. I actually stopped reading when I sensed that Charlton and Serena were about to break up. I planned to read after some time so I don't have to wait for updates in the break up period. I returned and now I see this. From the very start that I took a glimpse of this novel I already shipped Charlton and Serena. Meaning, that's what I came here for, Even the synopsis seemed to imply the ML being Charlton, but in the end? I am already feeling the angst and I haven't even read the whole novel yet and I am already feeling hurt just knowing how Charlton and Serena's relationship turned out. I don't want to feel this much angst anymore. I've already learned from a different novel in WN called "The Genius' First Love", that novel was just (ofmg)... So yea, I don't think I am going to continue reading this novel, sorry author-san... Here goes my opinion on the spoilers... I recommend to author-san: Since this is the development the author wanted (according to the spoiler), author-san should've just started the book from Geoffrey's death. If so, maybe it would have lesser drama and angst-feels for the readers... The development could be like this: The period where she had a relationship with Charlton would be a hidden past; the time when Geoffrey forced himself on her would also be a hidden past, These would then be memories to be slowly uncovered to the readers as the story progresses. With this, the readers are spared from angst, especially readers that support the Charlton and Serena's ship. Or so this is my opinion being one of the people that ships them T-T <///3 P.S. I honestly wish for there to be a tag or warning for novels with such development. Do you guys know how it feels when the you're "trying to read" until the end—no matter how much angst the novel has—only because you have that one tread of hope on your imagination, only for it to be crushed... I don't see it as a "mysterious" plotline with a an unknown and a very "unexpected twist", I see such stories as harsh-cold plot development </3
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AKUAROSE_2000
AKUAROSE_2000Lv2

😮‍💨I get you.

CharlatanKlein:*Author please notice me umu* What a mood. I actually stopped reading when I sensed that Charlton and Serena were about to break up. I planned to read after some time so I don't have to wait for updates in the break up period. I returned and now I see this. From the very start that I took a glimpse of this novel I already shipped Charlton and Serena. Meaning, that's what I came here for, Even the synopsis seemed to imply the ML being Charlton, but in the end? I am already feeling the angst and I haven't even read the whole novel yet and I am already feeling hurt just knowing how Charlton and Serena's relationship turned out. I don't want to feel this much angst anymore. I've already learned from a different novel in WN called "The Genius' First Love", that novel was just (ofmg)... So yea, I don't think I am going to continue reading this novel, sorry author-san... Here goes my opinion on the spoilers... I recommend to author-san: Since this is the development the author wanted (according to the spoiler), author-san should've just started the book from Geoffrey's death. If so, maybe it would have lesser drama and angst-feels for the readers... The development could be like this: The period where she had a relationship with Charlton would be a hidden past; the time when Geoffrey forced himself on her would also be a hidden past, These would then be memories to be slowly uncovered to the readers as the story progresses. With this, the readers are spared from angst, especially readers that support the Charlton and Serena's ship. Or so this is my opinion being one of the people that ships them T-T <///3 P.S. I honestly wish for there to be a tag or warning for novels with such development. Do you guys know how it feels when the you're "trying to read" until the end—no matter how much angst the novel has—only because you have that one tread of hope on your imagination, only for it to be crushed... I don't see it as a "mysterious" plotline with a an unknown and a very "unexpected twist", I see such stories as harsh-cold plot development </3
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champilyn
champilynAuthor

Since I have gone this far in writing this novel, I believe that this deserves a new review. The first part of the novel has already been completed. I just didn’t divide it because they haven’t finished the school year yet. However, the way the story will move from there, well the focus has shifted. Anyway, volume 1 is from chapter 1-161. The main focus is on Serena’s experience as a transmigrator, her new life, friends, experiences, and of course, her love life. In the process of writing that part, I have lost a lot of readers, They did not like what I did somewhere in between, but I cant change it because I think that it was necessary for the relationship between the two MC to evolve/ grow more than skinship. our ML needed to break away from everything that constricts him and to grow as an individual. Our FL also needed to realize that our ML is the only one for her. Now, From chapter 162- it should be volume 2, but the school year has not yet ended. Anyway, the story continues and the volume would end sometime when Charlton graduates. I’m not sure how long that would be but during this time, our ML and FL has already reconciled and their relationship is stronger. The main focus would be our ML and FL building solid foundation in their career. In addition, our ML would be building connections and all those before entering parliament. I think that this volume would be better than the 1st. As of writing, our ML aside from becoming a song producer would... well stop spoiler haha! But it would be an exciting ride I believe. (Lots of smut too to make up for the time they broke up). After writing that volume, I will be continuing with Volume 3. plan is, it would be the part where our ML enters parliament. There is no instant ramen in this novel. (Except for the early parts) it’s quite detailed and I have poured blood and sweat in writing this. To tell the truth, I spend 3-4 hours just to write one chapter and that does not include the time I edit it. I do a lot of research (which also is time consuming) whenever I write, and although this novel is not historically accurate, I made lots of references on Victorian era. From the dances, the polo match, the studio they sing in, and the merchants, the timeline although messed up are from Victorian era so please bear with me. I hope that everyone who reads this novel can enjoy it (though i know that that's not possible). I enjoy writing it most of the time and other times I just want to give up. I hope to continue writing this and I will as long as there are readers who loves reading this. So please, do give me a pat on the back sometimes for encouragement. 🥰 Anyway, this is quite long. Thanks for reading this review, and despite all the bashers which sometimes WN deletes because of the bad words, I will still give myself a 5 star rating!

Neon_echos
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