Since I have gone this far in writing this novel, I believe that this deserves a new review. The first part of the novel has already been completed. I just didn’t divide it because they haven’t finished the school year yet. However, the way the story will move from there, well the focus has shifted. Anyway, volume 1 is from chapter 1-161. The main focus is on Serena’s experience as a transmigrator, her new life, friends, experiences, and of course, her love life. In the process of writing that part, I have lost a lot of readers, They did not like what I did somewhere in between, but I cant change it because I think that it was necessary for the relationship between the two MC to evolve/ grow more than skinship. our ML needed to break away from everything that constricts him and to grow as an individual. Our FL also needed to realize that our ML is the only one for her. Now, From chapter 162- it should be volume 2, but the school year has not yet ended. Anyway, the story continues and the volume would end sometime when Charlton graduates. I’m not sure how long that would be but during this time, our ML and FL has already reconciled and their relationship is stronger. The main focus would be our ML and FL building solid foundation in their career. In addition, our ML would be building connections and all those before entering parliament. I think that this volume would be better than the 1st. As of writing, our ML aside from becoming a song producer would... well stop spoiler haha! But it would be an exciting ride I believe. (Lots of smut too to make up for the time they broke up). After writing that volume, I will be continuing with Volume 3. plan is, it would be the part where our ML enters parliament. There is no instant ramen in this novel. (Except for the early parts) it’s quite detailed and I have poured blood and sweat in writing this. To tell the truth, I spend 3-4 hours just to write one chapter and that does not include the time I edit it. I do a lot of research (which also is time consuming) whenever I write, and although this novel is not historically accurate, I made lots of references on Victorian era. From the dances, the polo match, the studio they sing in, and the merchants, the timeline although messed up are from Victorian era so please bear with me. I hope that everyone who reads this novel can enjoy it (though i know that that's not possible). I enjoy writing it most of the time and other times I just want to give up. I hope to continue writing this and I will as long as there are readers who loves reading this. So please, do give me a pat on the back sometimes for encouragement. 🥰 Anyway, this is quite long. Thanks for reading this review, and despite all the bashers which sometimes WN deletes because of the bad words, I will still give myself a 5 star rating!
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Author! I love your work! Those bashers? They are few and far in between, and they must have something wrong in their brain. I love this story so much and will continue to support it to the end. PS, please dont ever give up this story. You have no idea how much I look forward to reading it everyday! ❤️❤️❤️
Thank you very much for your kind words, i truly appreciate it. Don’t worry I won’t give up on this story (as long as I can). I will try my best to persevere in writingand completIng it. 🥰🥰🥰 Your wordS brought smile in my heart. Thanks aGain!
No, thank you for bringing this story to life. ❤️😍
author, this is so far one of the best rollercoaster to read and it's an amazing novel. hope you continue writing this and stay focused! readerfan101 ❤️❤️❤️
Thank you very much! 🥰🥰🥰😘😘😘🥲🥲🥲 sometimes i doubt myself but when readers comment and give me love i become more Encouraged. so again, Thanks. your words mean much to me 😍
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I am here to be spoiled . . . . . . . . . You said they 'reconciled' already. Did they, Charlton and Serene, really break up? Having this ideas makes me apprehensive in continuing this. TBH, what I've been reading recently got me having more/high expectations in every FL and ML's connection/trust to each other. That's why I might need stop reading to ready myself(if they really did break up). Only then will I continue reading this(binge reading I mean)...
They did but they will reconcile. 😁 it’s really good to get to that point haha
Ngl after i finished the book i almost cried out of frustration cuz charlton didnt know what actually happened and i was really expecting to see them get back together after all he did to secure their future but after calming down i realised how amazing this book actually is. ( i still wish they ended up together 😭 because when i read fantasy its my getaway from reality but i still love this book its on my tops list) Thank you for this amazing piece i hope to see more of ur work (or maybe a new volume to this book plsssssss?)
Thank you! ❤️
