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Naomi_NosimLv13yr
2021-05-28 14:47

Here I am again the way the story is developing I like it but please I don't want charlton to be trample over by serena because he loves her to much and I hope serena will find a standing even if it means defying her parents and society because really charlton deserve better than serena because still I don't like serena

Making the second male lead fall in love with me, the villainess

champilyn
4.7
391 Chs

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I love this story so much, it certainly satisfies my craving for an adult syled fairytale, while the 18+ moments are just right, not too much and not too little either. This is a well written and unique fantasy with a modern twist. All of the characters are relatable and interesting. The world setting is beautifully detailed and modeled after England around the Victorian era but in a fantasy world. As it is a fantasy world some things that appear in this story may seem modern and others may seem archaic, but that's the beauty of a fantasy setting, you can do whatever the heck you want!! The author makes sure to keep things interesting and funny. The love story between Charlton and Serena is so sweet and romantic you just want to melt into the arms of Charlton and claim his as your own! (though Kylo's not a bad catch either 😉) Anyway as I'm rambling, I kept putting off this review cause I was just so invested in the story and needed time to digest it all. At the time of writing, I have read up to chapter 270. So rest assured I can garuntee you'll love this unique and beautiful fairytale with outstanding characters and story. 💯

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After reading more than 300 chapters: My review: For those that has read as far as I did will either carry on with the story or leave.😅 “ I am staying”. 😄 For the new ones coming, I can only say that this a story where all can happen and what is perfect doesn’t mean it actually is and we only realise once we move on, enjoy the sweet moments and prepare for the actual journey. 😉 When we are young we love with our all, we make plans as if there is no tomorrow and this is Charlton and Serena a beautiful love story but can it survive all. ??? *** Geoffrey from the beginning not gonna lie I didn’t like him, later on he was actually a nice person, but all changes when he finds out he was Betrayed by his own cousin with his fiancee.😣 How far can you go because of the pain your love ones left on you and what does that pain makes you do. I am team Gerena 😈😅( Geoffrey & Serena) she isn’t better than him and he isn’t better than her, I skip them for not who he was but for who he will be after all his revenge (sorry I love yandere😅) things are going to be messy but extremely exciting, you know what happens after the storm. ⛈ 😆 “Not my own words”. “It’s Hard Is it letting Go Or Not letting Go Charlton and Geoffrey”. Only one will win.

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Hi everyone. This novel is marked completed and the sequel is now serializing. I believe that this novel is true to its title because the SML did fall for our villainess although they did not ultimately end up together. Volume 1: fun and light hearted how they fell in love. Volume 2: charlton starting to take steps on how he can have serena rightfully in the future. Volume 3: set 2 years after, Geoffrey finally figures our everything and he takes measures. Serena ends up marrying him (you can treat it as end of this novel already to make way for the new one) Volume 4: geoffrey and serena’s married life (you can treat it as side stories for this one but it has a purpose supposedly but i think there’s no more need to elaborate as we will see everything unfold in the sequel) So now, i wish to thank everyone who supported me in this novel and hope that you will continue to do so in the sequel. I think not a lot of previous readers would be able to read this but to new readers, well, enjoy the ride!

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Shamelessly ratIng my story with 5 stars. hope readers will enjoy! 😘 will try to update at least 1 or 2 chapters a weeK. Not yet decided on how many chapters this story will have [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] please Vote ❤️

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Since I have gone this far in writing this novel, I believe that this deserves a new review. The first part of the novel has already been completed. I just didn’t divide it because they haven’t finished the school year yet. However, the way the story will move from there, well the focus has shifted. Anyway, volume 1 is from chapter 1-161. The main focus is on Serena’s experience as a transmigrator, her new life, friends, experiences, and of course, her love life. In the process of writing that part, I have lost a lot of readers, They did not like what I did somewhere in between, but I cant change it because I think that it was necessary for the relationship between the two MC to evolve/ grow more than skinship. our ML needed to break away from everything that constricts him and to grow as an individual. Our FL also needed to realize that our ML is the only one for her. Now, From chapter 162- it should be volume 2, but the school year has not yet ended. Anyway, the story continues and the volume would end sometime when Charlton graduates. I’m not sure how long that would be but during this time, our ML and FL has already reconciled and their relationship is stronger. The main focus would be our ML and FL building solid foundation in their career. In addition, our ML would be building connections and all those before entering parliament. I think that this volume would be better than the 1st. As of writing, our ML aside from becoming a song producer would... well stop spoiler haha! But it would be an exciting ride I believe. (Lots of smut too to make up for the time they broke up). After writing that volume, I will be continuing with Volume 3. plan is, it would be the part where our ML enters parliament. There is no instant ramen in this novel. (Except for the early parts) it’s quite detailed and I have poured blood and sweat in writing this. To tell the truth, I spend 3-4 hours just to write one chapter and that does not include the time I edit it. I do a lot of research (which also is time consuming) whenever I write, and although this novel is not historically accurate, I made lots of references on Victorian era. From the dances, the polo match, the studio they sing in, and the merchants, the timeline although messed up are from Victorian era so please bear with me. I hope that everyone who reads this novel can enjoy it (though i know that that's not possible). I enjoy writing it most of the time and other times I just want to give up. I hope to continue writing this and I will as long as there are readers who loves reading this. So please, do give me a pat on the back sometimes for encouragement. 🥰 Anyway, this is quite long. Thanks for reading this review, and despite all the bashers which sometimes WN deletes because of the bad words, I will still give myself a 5 star rating!

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Im giving 4 stars for the 1st and 2nd volume .. I regret reading past that.. Im really disappointed by the turn of events and i never fell from being head over heels for the Fl to completly despising her.. No one have ever broke my heart like this novel did to me i have started reading for more than 5 months now and i remember going back home from college after the finals to reads new.chapters for.the comedy and romance.to relieve stress .. Now ironicly it became a source of stress for me .. That's kinda depressing.. I still cant believe that a r@pist can.get his happy ending while my poor charlton end up like that :/ The og novel's ending for him is way better at least he would still have his family .. Sorry for the long review i.just wantes to say whats in my heart.. After this novel i decided to only read completed novels after reading every review

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champilyn
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Hello everyone! as you can see this novel is now marked completed. The reason is because i don’t want to keep everyone hanging. I already wrote the whole plot and spoiler on the last chapTer in Volume 4 so if you read upto volume 3 ending you may treat that as this novel’s eNding. I might write volume 4 and 5 in the future, when I do, I will mark this novel serializing again or maybe i’ll just make it into a new book. Thank you all so much for all the support you gave me. It’s been more than 7 months since I wrote this Novel and I had been writing it non stop. I think I need a long break from this one. I still feel like crying when i posted the last chapter which was an announcement and all the spoilers. but I dont want to keep everyone hanging for a long time. So I just end this this way for now. I hope you still read my other works I think the ending of this novel at volume 3 is not bad too. 🥺 Again, thank you all so mUch for The support. I am now having sepanx about this novel but again, it’s for the best than just leaving it on a long break. it needed closure somewhat.

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