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Review Detail of Xephotor in TRUST NO ONE

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Xephotor
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The author throws the reader into the heart of the action. No background or exposition were necessarily given at the beginning of the story. It was a quick recap and done. A rushed introduction is not a bad thing and this novel has the potential to pull it off. The novel could benefit from a slower pace. (Do note that this is a hard thing to do. You get better at pacing as you write more.) The grammar is decent, but there are no jarring mistakes. The author has talent and I hope they continue writing.

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TRUST NO ONE

Peris_Machogu

Liked it!

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Peris_Machogu
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I appreciate the constructive feedback.