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2021-05-25 10:56

A fascinating and well-written story. The story developed pretty well in each chapter. The story is not fast nor too slow. The characters personality well portrayed. Highly recommend it for reading. Keep up the good work, Author!

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Thank you!!! I really appreciate it!!!

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