Item: The Serious Series Spacenovel
Rating: 3.6
Author: LordSputnik

LordSputnikLv133yr

2021-03-31 08:49

Serious review for a not-so-serious novel. The Good: I do love science-fiction! I also really enjoy it when a novel doesn't take itself seriously. We also have a wide array of characters to pick from that makes it rather fun! The Bad: Grammar is horrendous at times, but it does start to improve in the later chapters. I feel like this is a collection of short stories without any story. I'm a little confused by the chapters all using the same names over and over, but I think the author is trying to indicate which 'story' we're in. The Neutral: What is going on? Where is this story going? Will these unique stories tie together somehow later? I feel like a lot is going on, but I can't grasp any of it...

The Serious Series Spacenovel

etnrednal

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etnrednalAuthor

hey man, thanks i guess, keep on reading! Ill eventually get around to edit some of the earlier chapters. until then my various excuses for horrendous grammar are as follows; time, writing on the phone, blunt stupidity and far too much dope. story wise, be prepared. I have now set the stage and it ll soon start blowing up!

3yr

etnrednalAuthor

also on the chapter names, i decided to use them to indicate the perspective the viewer is given. Ultimately yes, this is a story of competing protagonists so you are free to cheer for whoever you like most and watch their fate unfold as they clash with each other.

3yr

LordSputnikLv13

Sorry if my review sounds harsh, by no means do I want you to feel discouraged. I try to be as critical as possible since almost every single review I see on WebNovel is "It's GR8 PLZ RD LOLZ!" followed by 5 stars. I gave my own novel a 3.4 even so I try to give an unbiased honest review.

etnrednal:hey man, thanks i guess, keep on reading! Ill eventually get around to edit some of the earlier chapters. until then my various excuses for horrendous grammar are as follows; time, writing on the phone, blunt stupidity and far too much dope. story wise, be prepared. I have now set the stage and it ll soon start blowing up!

3yr

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