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Nancy_Jim
Nancy_JimLv134yr
2021-03-07 21:37

Totally deserving of a five star if not more. Zero to none grammar errors. Updating stability excellent. I love the background transition of this story. It is clear that the author took out time to gather his thoughts. I can say that this is one of the best books that I have read on WN. Hey guys! When you check this out, remember to vote, drop comments, reviews, share and gift the author. This is truly amazing. Please don't drop, your story got me trapped TOTALLY.

Death before the Beginning (On Hiatus+Due for Rewrite)

YoanRoturier
4.8
3 Chs

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YoanRoturier
YoanRoturierAuthor

Hey 👋 :) Thank you for those kind words. Those really are motivating. I do not intend to drop this story, at the worst, it will just be a break. But I love writing so the chances of me really dropping this are... extremely close to zero. Anyway, I'm glad you liked the story and hope you'll stick around for the rest it. After all, the adventure is just starting and I have a lot in stock hehehe... (smirk). Cheers!

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Nancy_Jim
Nancy_JimLv13

I am here till the end[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

YoanRoturier:Hey 👋 :) Thank you for those kind words. Those really are motivating. I do not intend to drop this story, at the worst, it will just be a break. But I love writing so the chances of me really dropping this are... extremely close to zero. Anyway, I'm glad you liked the story and hope you'll stick around for the rest it. After all, the adventure is just starting and I have a lot in stock hehehe... (smirk). Cheers!
4yr
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YoanRoturier
YoanRoturierAuthor

“A man must not be without shame, for the shame of being without shame is shamelessness indeed.” – Mencius Therefore even if it is shameful, I am giving myself 5 stars! By the way, if you liked my book or any other books on this website, don't forget to leave reviews. It seriously helps us improve our writing style and the quality of our work. USUAL AUTHOR SPEECH ALERT: Of course, don't forget to smash down that powerstone button (don't destroy your mouse please) if you liked my book. Don't forget to keep it in your collection ;). It's also good to know what you guys think of us. Good or... less-good opinions are welcomed. Keep it constructive tho. For me, keeping a close look at what you think is only second to my outline. It also helps with the motivation and blah blah blah blah... Until next time, Fallens.

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GWEN
GWENLv2

I haven't read one chapter, but your synopsis is absolutely hilarious 😂🤣🤣 I did read to the end and what you said totally rocks! Your book must be the best of the best with attitude like that! Fighting!

3yr
Redink_109
Redink_109Lv3

First impression for your first chapter was amazing.. The naration sure detail, i can imagine the place, how Chara dresses. The story PLot anti mainstream.. This is good story! I recommended for you all, have a good work!

4yr
Aeipathy_02
Aeipathy_02Lv11

I have quite a few laughs here. First, there are few typos but don't really hinder me to read. Story development flows well. It is not too fast-paced and just right. Character design. I say the male lead has quite got a funny personality. The other characters too are quite good. World background. It is set in a dungeon. And the author crafted it well, including the items and skills. Overall a great read already. Keep it up, author!

4yr
The_Laboratory
The_LaboratoryLv1

From what I've read so far, this story seems to be a very well written and promising start for a new author. I'd recommend you read this if you like fantasy, and are a stickler for proper grammar in your webnovels, but also just of you like rich worldbuilding and original takes on a few character archetypes. Sorry if this review is incoherent, but it's the best I've got in me currently.

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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4

The author's narration was grand and superb! I am quite jealous right now! If I can copy his skills, then I will rise from the ashes and conquer the world of novels! Huhahaha! BTW, Your story is unique and the attack to the genre was not common. An amazing piece of art! Good job!

4yr
Madyan_wani
Madyan_waniLv10

Woah! Fellow author. Your book is hooking from start. I love bg, plot, and scenario. Dark Fantasy is one of my favorite genres. Hope your work be a mass hit in the future. Fighting!

4yr
TofSpades
TofSpadesLv3

This story is a true work of art. The plot is very unique and different to the things I've read in the past. Anything can happen, so the readers are always at the edge of their seats. Great work Author!

4yr
uhjuihoijio
uhjuihoijioLv1

A funny take of the levelling genre. The MC made me laugh. I thought the world was well built and a lot went into building it. The story had a good pace and was easy to read. Looking forward to seeing where it goes.

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