Review Detail of DetectiveJones in Harry Potter: New World

What can i say. This FF is EXTREMELY boring. The story pretty much follows cannon but with the MC on the sidelines with Hermione doing nothing but studying and discussing magic for chapters at a time while the Duo of Ron & Harry follow the cannon plot in the background. MC barely intervenes in the plot which wouldn't be bad if he had fuck all to do. Rather, what you get is nothing but study sessions with a few observations on the actions of the Golden Duo. How they even get passed year 1 without Hermione is beyond me. The only times he interacts with the cannon plot itself is when he's forced to. Good example is Year 2 with the basilisk. He tells Hermione whats attacking the school early on, only 2 weeks after Filch's cat, and they only decide to go to Mcgonnagal at the last minute. When she doesnt believe them, they just shrug and go about their studies. Its not until the MC is just randomly hanging out when he decides to tell Ron and Harry, but not because of any logical reason, no its because he is influenced by a light Confundus charm that makes him act out of character. Overall, the Grammar is terrible, Story is non existent outside of cannon plots and small minor familial stuff that could be solved real easy. MC makes very idiotic decisions constantly that get blamed on Dementors, Hormone Not being smart to begin with etc... He has advanced knowledge but never once uses it. Hell he doesnt even take any real countermeasures against event he knows are coming. All in all, dont waste your time 4 & 5 star reviews are either blind or havent read.