What can i say. This FF is EXTREMELY boring. The story pretty much follows cannon but with the MC on the sidelines with Hermione doing nothing but studying and discussing magic for chapters at a time while the Duo of Ron & Harry follow the cannon plot in the background. MC barely intervenes in the plot which wouldn't be bad if he had fuck all to do. Rather, what you get is nothing but study sessions with a few observations on the actions of the Golden Duo. How they even get passed year 1 without Hermione is beyond me. The only times he interacts with the cannon plot itself is when he's forced to. Good example is Year 2 with the basilisk. He tells Hermione whats attacking the school early on, only 2 weeks after Filch's cat, and they only decide to go to Mcgonnagal at the last minute. When she doesnt believe them, they just shrug and go about their studies. Its not until the MC is just randomly hanging out when he decides to tell Ron and Harry, but not because of any logical reason, no its because he is influenced by a light Confundus charm that makes him act out of character. Overall, the Grammar is terrible, Story is non existent outside of cannon plots and small minor familial stuff that could be solved real easy. MC makes very idiotic decisions constantly that get blamed on Dementors, Hormone Not being smart to begin with etc... He has advanced knowledge but never once uses it. Hell he doesnt even take any real countermeasures against event he knows are coming. All in all, dont waste your time 4 & 5 star reviews are either blind or havent read.

No only 8 chapters. No Announcements in over a year besides the Authors other Novel Arcane Thief. Safe to say its dropped.

What is the point in hiding from his family when literally everyone knows who he is? Its not like hes a child anymore.

Easiest explanation is she is raised by everyone in the tribe. They all look out for each other as if they were their own child.

Physical strength and he can store things in a spacial inventory pretty much as long as he can pick it up.

it's the water he stored. Basically kinda like an space inventory that he can draw upon.

Thanks you were right there was a mistake in the upload order.

ahh yes, the fabled banana dream!

Nope no Yuri or Yaoi dont worry lol :)

Haha just a tad bit ;)

I wont get too into it, but he's a phoenix not human. Think of them as the protectors of Beasts.

Hello, Figured I'd write a semi Shameless review to celebrate getting contracted. Thanks for atleast checking my novel out so far. Took me a little to get the whole writing thing down, but as of chapter 16 I consider this is a must read! The Character development and character interaction will feel great... and the drama will be kept at a steady level that most readers will feel comfortable with... and as a warning if it feels rushed in the begining with the first time happening so fast.. it is explained later that there are time limits placed on the students! So give it a shot and let me know how you feel! :)

At least do some editing when you copy and paste my dude

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No gotta give the man a break. He went from a Normal dude to a King in no time flat. Not to mention, he has to fight a war with no chance of winning unless he unifies people who are adverse to that by nature. He doesn't have the confidence or experience of a king and is leading by ideals and heart alone at the moment.

Thank You!

Nope since the core split, he got all the powers of a phoenix at slightly reduced levels so Phoenix rebirth is still one of his abilities. It just has some caveat so its not completely OP and broken.