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Review Detail of Shiny_Shirogane in Sate My Soul

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Well, this is the review for the 1st chapter that I have read. (No further chapters are released yet) The story is fast-paced and the reasons for MC's actions aren't made clear. He says he wants to save the women so he killed the tavern owner but that isn't a good reason enough cause there are usually lotta things that play here. Like laws, societal norms, and regional culture. Now there are two possibilities 1. The setting is a dystopia,(which hasn't been made clear in the story yet) 2. The MC is ignorant of the laws and doesn't mind being a criminal which is really weird. I think the story should explain more about the setting of the world and the reasons for MC's actions

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EdMakuKusune

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Very helpful, kind sir. I'll be sure to fix that in the future.