Review Detail of Xephotor in I'm Overpowered, but I Want to Live a Quiet Life

The grammar is flawless. I would need to major in English to find some flaw here. The sentence flow is great. Sentence flow improves the readability of the story and it shows here. It cannot be understated that the chapters here are beautifully written. They could belong in a grammar textbook. The plot is where the story falls short. The story is linear and the events are predictable. Readers familiar with the setting and genre could say that they read this story before. In later chapters, I would like to see the author to dive into more intricate schemes or conspiracies. Complex long term villains. Shady allies and tentative alliances. There are also the moral dilemmas that come with great power. The author has great writing talent and I look forward to the later chapters and their future works.