Review Detail of GreenSamurai in A Possessive Mafia Leader

This review is after chapter one. The characters and world are ripe for the picking. The stability of updates is good. But the bad is writing quality. I believe that English is not the writers first language. And learning another language is something I have yet to do myself. I applaud them on their work so far but the phrases are just to out of place for English. It took me out of the story way to much. If I would give one point of advice to the author I would say to listen to English speakers some more, like on youtube. It will help you develop your craft. And nothing but luck to the author.