Review Detail of Oracle17 in A Possessive Mafia Leader

I like the cover, I think it gives succinct info about what the book is likely to be about— romance, mafia and the likes. I liked the first chapter describing the main characters in the story. I noticed there was too much 'unnecessary' description as the story progressed though, you can work on that. This book has the potential to be really beautiful, you can work a little more on the plot and the dialogue too, make it more realistic and believable. Well done❤🌹