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i_did_this1st
i_did_this1stLv14yr
2021-03-21 05:23

Needs alot of work but overall the story is progressing and slowly developing. some character's thoughts are a little jumbled. Needs proofreading and the structure is a little rocky. But it's a great story so far... thank you for sharing

The last leaf on the tree

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27 Chs

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ibbygal
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The title and the synopsis really got my attention. I love the storyline and the author's choice of word is really good... I definitely recommend this book

4yr

NakhariSong
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This story is very interesting! I was completely caught up in it, great work from the author! [img = actualización][img = actualización][img = recomendar]

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Quesiyahxx
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very interesting story line and definitely catches reader attention. I look forward to unlocking the mystery in the book. However, the grammar and spelling needs work, as well as the consistency in writing style and structure. Overall, Nice job, keep it going

3yr
Hiraeth_Faith
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I love how the story is so well written! This deserves 5 star! The charactersss are written well, the plot is amazing, and the writing style Of the author is superb

3yr
Vee_bee
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The synopsis and storylines are interesting and unique. I have read only a few chapters and have fallen in love with the book. I highly recommend the book.

3yr
Rainforestt
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The plot is something I love, the characters are great and the writing style is what I am enjoy the most. The way author moves the story is incredible. Great work🤞

3yr
igb9nak5
igb9nak5Lv1

Hey, guys 👋I'm sorry about the genre misunderstanding it's supposed to be more young-adult, mystery or thriller but unfortunately, I couldn't put those as genre. So sorry if you've been questioning.😅😉

3yr
Uae
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The book is interesting and heart-touching. I like emotion it conveys and I love the characters. The author did a great job with its storyline.

3yr
Dreamy_star
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so far now the story is going well and the storylines Are too good... I waiting to see further well-done author keep going. I would love to add this book in my library

3yr
Not_Active
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Its a great story and an interesting read. Something is definietly off with ruby and I cant wait to read more. The plot is definIetly unique so I’ll defiinetly read till the end. Well done author! Great work!!!

3yr
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