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MichelleLeeee
MichelleLeeeeLv33yr
2021-03-12 06:11

I feel like... I just read a script for a future drama. The novel is in POVs and you get the idea of how each character feels and thinks. I like how the author writes dialogues and made it realistic. Only thing I would suggest is to reread and fix some pronouns and sentence structures. If you are looking for the next drama, miscommunication, heartache, and love- READ THIS BOOK!

Sealed Fate: Love Found and Lost

itslikeametaphor
4.9
128 Chs

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This is high praise! Thank you. I will surely check out what you have mentioned )

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Chuck45Single
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What a good read! The main characters are fleshed out nicely, the writing is of good quality and there's lots of humor sprinkled into it. I can totally recommend this to anyone interested in fiery relationships! :D Good job author, keep it up.

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goldenchild725
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It's actually a really funny and cute story. You've done a really good job with your writing quality. Your grammar, spelling and punctuation are excellent. Your story development is also really good. You started in the future, then went back in time, which is really good. It makes the story interesting. Your character design is also quite good. I like your female lead. She's funny.

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BlaccLotus
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F.a.s.c.i.n.a.t.i.n.g and very well written book. Beautifully written story and characters. Dazzling five stars for author's style of writing as I like it a lot. Author is great with her choice of words and her style in structuring sentence. Her writing is cool and she is very great in writing the dialogue. You could feel the characters through their interaction which is written in fresh and unique style. I find the writing here is up to professional standard as throughout the story you will find little to no mistake in grammar. This book is extremely comfortable to read, way above most of webnovels. Writing wise, story wise, characters wise, female lead wise, humour wise. All rightly deserve perfect five stars. The way author introduced and explained things is good. Story development has been good so far, the anticipation and guessing keeps me at the edge every time. The story is filled with emotions and feelings that are portrayed well. I've read a lot of webnovels and this book is among top list that I could find myself so immerse with the story. Believe me this author is really talented and creative writer. Please if you could keep your regular updates I could see there will be a time for this book to get well recognised. Very promising book. I'm not trying to be cheesy here but it's my honest review of this book as I genuinely like this book. My appreciation for good quality book. The bad: It's hard to find flaw in this book really, as this book is almost flawless. From writing, story, characters and everything is good. So I could only pointed out it personal. Personally, so far I find it hard to like Jordan, I don't know why but don't get me wrong his character is interesting, again it's my personal opinion. Cover is not good enough for a story as good as this. And the last, it's shame to say but the level of writing in this book (for me personally as a writer) is discouraging. I mean, writing wise, this book is great to the point I ask myself, why do I write. I wish I could write like this someday, well don't mind me. Again, the writing is what I like most in this book. However, I got bad omen regarding the direction of the story is heading, knowing the future in the first chapter and from the title. I mean look at the title: Love FOUND and LOST. not LOST AND FOUND. it could be just my feeling, I hope the story ends on happy note, for Rosemary and Mr Parker. It's truly great reading experience! Best luck for you!

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Megana4
Megana4Lv2

Wow, amazing title & unique storyline...I read the initial chapters and it dived me deeply into the story...Well portrayed main characters...The author's writing style is well written...I hope the story ends on a happy note...added it to my library...Excellent work, Author!

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Riley_Steverose
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I always like the story where ML is a playboy, and soon he falls in love with the FL. This story is one of my favorite genres, and I started reading out this one casually. After a couple of chapters, I got hooked up with the book. I am looking forward to reading more.

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BlindBandit
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KAWAII~~ How cute!, its breathtaking, just wow, I kept reading and reading and reading... like no tomorrow, The story is well developed, the characters expressions can be felt through the screen, I recommend this book to others, Its beautiful! Keep up the great work Author! Kudos to you!

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Tokio999
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Amazing storyline, you did a great job over there. Keep me notified and hope you'll maintain this amazing job. Keep up author!!

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CodeyVanilla
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This is really beautiful, Wow. I just couldn’t stop reading. The storyline is well developed, the characters are so relatable, the world background is exceptional. There’s absolutely no fault in the story. It is a good definition of PERFECT. Keep it up,author . You definitely have a fan now😉😉😊😊

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