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Review Detail of Haplo484 in The Rise of the Black Plain

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It's a very well-written story that is entertaining, that continually develops a larger and larger world, and the characters are generally displayed as actual people instead of one-dimensional stereotypes. If I had to nitpick, I'd say that although I'm 600 chapters in, and there have been struggles and problems to be overcome (unlike what you'd see in a boring wish-fulfillment webnovel), things haven't been all THAT challenging for the MC, and coincidence can lean his way pretty heavily for things to go right sometimes. It's still a good book and well worth reading. A pet peeve I've had with this book is that the s*x scenes serve literally no purpose whatsoever. There's no plot or exposition, they don't serve to move the story along, and despite how much prowess in bed the MC supposedly has, they're utterly boring. Literally every scene so far involves the MC lying on his back, with the girl in the 69 position or cowgirl position. In the case of when he's with two girls, one is in cowgirl, the other is sitting on him. I don't know if he's lazy, a sub, or what, but despite claims to how good he is in bed, he doesn't actually do anything. It would be better to not have those scenes than to just basically copy/paste over and over again.

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