Authors giving their own stories a review seems like a tradition here, so I might as well get in line. The MC is an angry and bitter 'hero' that has a vendetta against a powerful being that tricked and deceived him. He gets a gamer-ish power from another powerful being that will help him grow strong, but not overly quickly since it lacks some gamer functions. I don't plan to rush the story too much, but knowing myself, I just jinxed that. He will be visiting worlds that most of you are familiar with, but I might throw a curveball in the future. My grammar is... okay, I guess. I'm not a native speaker, so I'll make mistakes. If you spot them and you aren't too lazy, leave a comment for me to fix them.
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Hmm from how you deliver and make this comment made me feel that you are a reasonable guy and knows the intricancies of the world of degenerate here in webnovel, which i am not but majority of 'Children' here will be screamimg for "hArEm pLsS!!" So author-san, u have your first fan.
I don't mind harems as long as they aren't mega forced with girls dropping on their knees just by the sight of the mc. most harem stories are like that, but I've seen a few well made
GeneralAldrnari:Hmm from how you deliver and make this comment made me feel that you are a reasonable guy and knows the intricancies of the world of degenerate here in webnovel, which i am not but majority of 'Children' here will be screamimg for "hArEm pLsS!!" So author-san, u have your first fan.
Ditto!! !!!
GeneralAldrnari:Hmm from how you deliver and make this comment made me feel that you are a reasonable guy and knows the intricancies of the world of degenerate here in webnovel, which i am not but majority of 'Children' here will be screamimg for "hArEm pLsS!!" So author-san, u have your first fan.
Please finish this story even if you go premium!
GrreedyGoblin:I don't mind harems as long as they aren't mega forced with girls dropping on their knees just by the sight of the mc. most harem stories are like that, but I've seen a few well made
I don't believe fanfictions can even go premium, but I will try to finish it.
Epaxx:Please finish this story even if you go premium!
So will this be a harem or some kind of love interest? No offense, but if you jump around the worlds, then I won't read this without a harem. You can throw a dirty comment at me, I will not be offended, I will just curse you. hehe. But I'm a little serious, answer, this is an important point without an answer to which work will simply gather dust in my library.
thats where i come in
GeneralAldrnari:Hmm from how you deliver and make this comment made me feel that you are a reasonable guy and knows the intricancies of the world of degenerate here in webnovel, which i am not but majority of 'Children' here will be screamimg for "hArEm pLsS!!" So author-san, u have your first fan.
The real question will MC be a pathetic Hero wannabe who plays fix it or will he be a true mercenary like if MC is Hired by Voldemort to kill Albus would MC do it who cares about the world type of guy.
You might want to remove the "this isn't my native language, so expect mistakes" warning, cause you are better at writing in english than the vast majority of people who grew up with it as their first language. By the way, I found this story on Fanfiction.com, with only the number of chapter different, did you spread them out here?
Um, I still make a lot of mistakes, but I do end up fixing some of them. And I do post on ff as well, but I combine the chapters there.
Darquesse:You might want to remove the "this isn't my native language, so expect mistakes" warning, cause you are better at writing in english than the vast majority of people who grew up with it as their first language. By the way, I found this story on Fanfiction.com, with only the number of chapter different, did you spread them out here?
Ah, "should remove" was probably incorrect, I meant to say "you don't really need that warning."
GrreedyGoblin:Um, I still make a lot of mistakes, but I do end up fixing some of them. And I do post on ff as well, but I combine the chapters there.
Will there be lemons?
GrreedyGoblin:I don't mind harems as long as they aren't mega forced with girls dropping on their knees just by the sight of the mc. most harem stories are like that, but I've seen a few well made
So is this a harem? Or is he going in solo? And by the way, is it dropped or(hopefully) just a very long hiatus
GrreedyGoblin:I don't mind harems as long as they aren't mega forced with girls dropping on their knees just by the sight of the mc. most harem stories are like that, but I've seen a few well made
