This fanfic is very good. It wasn't exactly what I was expecting, but it's close enough. The writing style is very good, especially compared to other fanfics on this app, and the timeline that the MC was reborn into is rare for a fanfic (between Episode 3 & 4). There are really only a couple criticisms to make. The first is the update stability, which is not really good: only 20 chapters in 6 months. Though that seems to be improving. The second is that the MC gets things handed to him too easily imo. I mean he's granted these blindly loyal subordinates that pop into thin air on a whim, no training or build-up required. Moreover, apparently the MC even has the option to create entire planets out of nothing. To be honest, while I expected some creation and spawning, since it's in the title, I didn't expect it to be as bluntly OP as it is. Right now the Mc doesn't really have to put in any effort at all if he doesn't want to. He could just spawn blindly loyal, sentient subordinates, sit back, and let them rack up the points for him, allowing him to purchase more, and so on. It doesn't really make for an entertaining story in my opinion, but to each their own. I'm sure that many people find that sort of OPness enjoyable to read.
ForceFromBeyond
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LIKE"The typical loser who can't handle the truth." Let it be known you're the one who started with the insults, and they even apply to yourself. Saves me the trouble I guess
ForceFromBeyond:The minute I put your intellect in place, you came to review harshly. The typical loser who can't handle the truth. Thank for the review anyway, goodbye.
Author, don’t let that idiot bother you. As an author myself, you’ll run into crybabies like this guy often. Your work is good, so going and ignore this goofy clown. I saw where you told him this and he couldn’t handle it and rush to review it here. He’s a low-down crybaby, keep up the good work! 😂🥃🤗🙏😚👍
ForceFromBeyond:The minute I put your intellect in place, you came to review harshly. The typical loser who can't handle the truth. Thank for the review anyway, goodbye.
I was actually about to read this novel, but I changed my mind after I found out that the author can’t even handle constructive criticism.
ForceFromBeyond:The minute I put your intellect in place, you came to review harshly. The typical loser who can't handle the truth. Thank for the review anyway, goodbye.