webnovel
avatar

Review Detail of OukisLips in Star Wars: The Creation & Spawn System

Review detail

OukisLips
OukisLipsLv142yrOukisLips

This fanfic is very good. It wasn't exactly what I was expecting, but it's close enough. The writing style is very good, especially compared to other fanfics on this app, and the timeline that the MC was reborn into is rare for a fanfic (between Episode 3 & 4). There are really only a couple criticisms to make. The first is the update stability, which is not really good: only 20 chapters in 6 months. Though that seems to be improving. The second is that the MC gets things handed to him too easily imo. I mean he's granted these blindly loyal subordinates that pop into thin air on a whim, no training or build-up required. Moreover, apparently the MC even has the option to create entire planets out of nothing. To be honest, while I expected some creation and spawning, since it's in the title, I didn't expect it to be as bluntly OP as it is. Right now the Mc doesn't really have to put in any effort at all if he doesn't want to. He could just spawn blindly loyal, sentient subordinates, sit back, and let them rack up the points for him, allowing him to purchase more, and so on. It doesn't really make for an entertaining story in my opinion, but to each their own. I'm sure that many people find that sort of OPness enjoyable to read.

altalt

Star Wars: The Creation & Spawn System

ForceFromBeyond

Liked by 4 people

LIKE

Replies5

ForceFromBeyond
ForceFromBeyondAuthorForceFromBeyond

The minute I put your intellect in place, you came to review harshly. The typical loser who can't handle the truth. Thank for the review anyway, goodbye.

OukisLips
OukisLipsLv14OukisLips

"The typical loser who can't handle the truth." Let it be known you're the one who started with the insults, and they even apply to yourself. Saves me the trouble I guess

ForceFromBeyond:The minute I put your intellect in place, you came to review harshly. The typical loser who can't handle the truth. Thank for the review anyway, goodbye.
Monster_Paradise
Monster_ParadiseLv11Monster_Paradise

Author, don’t let that idiot bother you. As an author myself, you’ll run into crybabies like this guy often. Your work is good, so going and ignore this goofy clown. I saw where you told him this and he couldn’t handle it and rush to review it here. He’s a low-down crybaby, keep up the good work! 😂🥃🤗🙏😚👍

ForceFromBeyond:The minute I put your intellect in place, you came to review harshly. The typical loser who can't handle the truth. Thank for the review anyway, goodbye.
Sin_of_GREED
Sin_of_GREEDLv13Sin_of_GREED

and there's no mention of op system or op mc or op cheat in the synopsis and tags which should be second since he can buy people he could just buy a whole bunch of jedis loyal to him yet he is trying to save the current one it really annoying 🤣😂😂😂

Om_Patel_4281
Om_Patel_4281Lv13Om_Patel_4281

I was actually about to read this novel, but I changed my mind after I found out that the author can’t even handle constructive criticism.

ForceFromBeyond:The minute I put your intellect in place, you came to review harshly. The typical loser who can't handle the truth. Thank for the review anyway, goodbye.