Review Detail of Zenhood_Symphonity in Life in Shinobi World (Naruto Fan-Fic)

hey man I totally agree with u, I write this fic when I completed naeuto and read it's several fics and wanted to some story and I was/am totally trash at writing. So as u saw it turned out to be typical Marie sue fanfic...... When I look back I even find myself hard to read, so anyways all I can say is thanks for review and hope u find some fics out there and I say if u are fan got and wantbto read some good fics just check out ao3 and fanfiction.net for that

author what are you insinuating. If u start something you should finish it. the story had potential to grow and be come better afterall with your church mind do you want to tell me that OG naruto was good, but it grew to the anime my like,reference and love. If you keep giving up on everything then you will always and forever be a quitter and never improve. 1 he is not ridiculously op from the start that he becomes boring to read about. 2 he is like sasuke who had to train his power and like naruto with a loveable attitude and 3 the powerset makes him like a kuruko of naruto which means chance to grow in an like the hidden third man of the fantastic duo of naruto/sasuke with his great healing abilities and rival to push sakura. 4 if u still are not convinced then transfer the story to me to build up.