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sword_demon
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Just giving my personal review You can find fics a lot better than this out there but it is readable so you can give it a try. Grammar is ok not too good not too bad. Writing quality is decent, as English is not my first language, sometimes if something is in my mind and I want to write it down but I am unable to express it while writing. The story's start is a bit different but you also can find some similarities with others of Naruto on this platform in the later part. And yeah I did too much drama in the start but I did not want to it this much. So yeah some may hate it. Well, some may hate my complete novel which I also find not up to the mark when I compare to others. But I am improving, maybe later I can write it better so that it will be more enjoyable to read. As it's my story so I can't find too many flaws but I can say that some people may like it so you can give it a try. And if you find any holes and flaws then notify I will try my best to correct them. And yeah I will give it five stars even though writing some flaws. It's my fic

Life in Shinobi World (Naruto Fan-Fic)

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Daoist_david
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+1

Jackson_Alucard611
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so author san who is the main love interest

sword_demon
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Yamanaka Ino

Jackson_Alucard611:so author san who is the main love interest
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so when is the next chapter I'm excited for it

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Yes!

sword_demon:Yamanaka Ino
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As long*

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