being one of the shameless authors ,. giving 5 star to my fanfic as its my first fanfic kindly point out the mistakes thank you for reading

Just giving my personal review You can find fics a lot better than this out there but it is readable so you can give it a try. Grammar is ok not too good not too bad. Writing quality is decent, as English is not my first language, sometimes if something is in my mind and I want to write it down but I am unable to express it while writing. The story's start is a bit different but you also can find some similarities with others of Naruto on this platform in the later part. And yeah I did too much drama in the start but I did not want to it this much. So yeah some may hate it. Well, some may hate my complete novel which I also find not up to the mark when I compare to others. But I am improving, maybe later I can write it better so that it will be more enjoyable to read. As it's my story so I can't find too many flaws but I can say that some people may like it so you can give it a try. And if you find any holes and flaws then notify I will try my best to correct them. And yeah I will give it five stars even though writing some flaws. It's my fic

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Quite enjoyable to read. However, the MC seems smart but horribly naïve at the same time, and by that I mean he trust way too easily especially knowing the dangers of the Naruto world. All around, just a fun story to read.

Well your novel is good so I am giving yo 5 stars But I think you should improve your english I know its not your 1st language but at least you should try There is too much drama , I know its important for character to grow but in starting chapters its too much. you should try to do it a little less All in all I like your novel and keep up the good work

Suffers from the same 'reborn in naruto illness' as most of the naruto fanfic out there, the mc is a little kid for most of the fanfic and it will never get past the chuunin exam, as usual. Not wowrth reading, You have read one, you read them all. It suffers from all th tropes from 'toddlers of war' to 'genius 2 years old' and all the likes. I blame part of it on kishimoto and his love of child soldiers, the gaiden arc truly did attract the wrong people to the fandom...

I would recommend this as a fic, Ive read many others and nothing can compare, The writting Quality is something that eveRy book should strive for.

good idea for naruto fanfic or should i say hyuuga fanfic? interesting! although ssome slight mispellings and punctuations could be corrected by using grammarly *not advertising ok*, It doesnt cause readers to be distracted. Overall good, i hope author can create original hyuuga justu. thank you!