The main character lacks ambition and his emotions are dull and unexplored. His time in Kronos's stomach is glossed over and this pain is momentary. The plot also seems to be like canon since all the Elder Gods already have their symbol of power and domains predetermined even before the end of the Titanomachy. The characters were unleashed and act in a very comical anime way, never explored in-depth enough to know their personalities yet to be molded by time. The author is also does not take critique well, using rascist slurs and dismissing any advice at all, with my previous review being taken down.
AfricanProdigy14
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LIKECuteness_preacher9:no your literally telling him to make it not about what it was meant to be about
AfricanProdigy14:How does it feel to be the only one to give a negative review?
AfricanProdigy14:How does it feel to be the only one to give a negative review?
nĂŁo que eu nĂŁo entenda sua critica, mais nĂŁo Ă© exatamente um problema com a obra, ela obviamente tem um rumo diferente do que vocĂȘ deseja essa obra apenas nĂŁo Ă© para vocĂȘ se vocĂȘ espera alguma coisa lenta profunda e madura fora que todos as coisas que vocĂȘ reclama sobre a mitologia e suas personalidades saiba eles realmente eram assim, isso ainda Ă© uma fan-fic de percy jackson nĂŁo obra totalmente original e diferente sobre a mitologia grega.
AfricanProdigy14:How does it feel to be the only one to give a negative review?
l can understand you author. In latest chapter the curse is just too be cruel and l would like to see how you bend the story so their is peace between everyone and curse is lifted . Last but not least your story is marvelous.
AfricanProdigy14:How does it feel to be the only one to give a negative review?
AfricanProdigy14:How does it feel to be the only one to give a negative review?
I understand what you mean, but I like it regardless. Also what you said about the unexplored time and emotions are something to be expected in this premise. I think in the future there will be time skips of a hundred years and it will be glossed over, kinda like a cultivation novel. Instead of a very charismatic god who everyone likes, I think the author is trying to build a more aloof and mysterious hidden boss character who is misunderstood. Probably a personal preference on the author's part but its more realistic and easier for people to get this way. Nitpicking an aspect about it just goes to show how much of a masterpiece this fanfic. we don't get a lot of those, but its still very early on, just 18 or so chapters. Looking forward to seeing how this plays out. P.S. i think the reason your review is taken very poorly is because you are personally attacking the author. Not a good idea
Shadyninja:I understand what you mean, but I like it regardless. Also what you said about the unexplored time and emotions are something to be expected in this premise. I think in the future there will be time skips of a hundred years and it will be glossed over, kinda like a cultivation novel. Instead of a very charismatic god who everyone likes, I think the author is trying to build a more aloof and mysterious hidden boss character who is misunderstood. Probably a personal preference on the author's part but its more realistic and easier for people to get this way. Nitpicking an aspect about it just goes to show how much of a masterpiece this fanfic. we don't get a lot of those, but its still very early on, just 18 or so chapters. Looking forward to seeing how this plays out. P.S. i think the reason your review is taken very poorly is because you are personally attacking the author. Not a good idea