Review Detail of Maniacss in Harry potter : The perfect mage

Item: Harry potter : The perfect mage
Rating: 5

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ManiacssAuthor3yrManiacss

Using my authors power to wGet 5 stars. Oknow i am writing this as a stress relief so I think it will be quite consistent. Now that shows You hpw much stress i have Anywho, english isnt my firslt language so be gentlE and any recommendations are acceptable

Harry potter : The perfect mage

Maniacss

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thomasoienLv15thomasoien

the only problem I have with the story is his age in his 1st life and how he talks/thinks. making his 1st life age be 15-16 seems more likely with how he acts.

3yr

DragonkingKyoLv6DragonkingKyo

who is the love interest?

3yr

ManiacssAuthorManiacss

Daphne, tonks , astoria , fleur . Any one of tHese

DragonkingKyo:who is the love interest?

3yr

DragonkingKyoLv6DragonkingKyo

to bad was hope for Hermoine

Maniacss:Daphne, tonks , astoria , fleur . Any one of tHese

3yr

LUCIFER_20Lv4LUCIFER_20

These are some good choices.

Maniacss:Daphne, tonks , astoria , fleur . Any one of tHese

3yr

Monkey_lord57Lv3Monkey_lord57

The writer need a Editor the Grammer is very poor a seems like a rip off of the Harry Potter the protecter and the dark lord dummbledoor

3yr

ManiacssAuthorManiacss

There is no editor and i am writing on a phone, well the story i inspired and if you look out tgeretgere are several stories similar. i wont deny i take some elemts out of them But try to add some oF Mine as well after all tHis is what a fan fiction is

Monkey_lord57:The writer need a Editor the Grammer is very poor a seems like a rip off of the Harry Potter the protecter and the dark lord dummbledoor

3yr

WesternGodLv14WesternGod

That synopsis is a really big run on sentence.

3yr

ProfessorofCultureLv14ProfessorofCulture

just get all

Maniacss:Daphne, tonks , astoria , fleur . Any one of tHese

3yr

king_o_lustLv3king_o_lust

will there be 1 wife or 2 or more

3yr