Review Detail of Paul_Tromba in Tech Priest and Immortal

The story itself is intriguing and the characters seem somewhat realistic. the first chapter didn't have that much of a hook other than a right hook if you know what I mean but after that I was drawn in. There are a few spelling mistakes through the first couple of chapters but it gets better as you go. all in all, the story has caught my attention and has me wanting more. keep up the good work.