Thanks for pointing that out

Okay. I'll try to start doing that.

you're welcome, but I update every Sunday and Wednesday. I've already started it.

You're probably right. Though I can't seem to think of good ones. I tried doing independent titles for every chapter with another story that I was working on but it wasn't that good. I can just never think of good titles.

Not an Error. The mountains are around six hours north of where they were. It takes them around three to four hours to get from the Alsenia/Empire border to the Alsenian capital. Don't know where it said two hours. Hope that this clears it up.

Thank you for reading it!

Thank you for the comment. I will continue with this novel till the end. There will be new chapters every Sunday and Wednesday.

this story is a long ways away from ending my friend. I hope that you continue to read it as you have been. also thank you for the votes.

The story itself is intriguing and the characters seem somewhat realistic. the first chapter didn't have that much of a hook other than a right hook if you know what I mean but after that I was drawn in. There are a few spelling mistakes through the first couple of chapters but it gets better as you go. all in all, the story has caught my attention and has me wanting more. keep up the good work.

sure thing

thank you so much for the good review! I plan on putting it through a few more drafts upon its completion. though, it's always good to hear people thoughts on the characters and the story itself. glad you enjoy it and I hope you continue to read it as the story progresses.

Thank you! I am glad you think it's good so far and hope that you continue to read it. It is rather enjoyable when people comment on my work so please do so when you you feel like it.