I have only read a few chapters and I stopped reading. Your protagonist doesn't really have any character development , he is very stupid , has 8th grade syndrome and it is very cringy , specially the dark lord bit. And what is the use of REINCARNATING someone in black clover world if the only idea he has is "bronze ball and bronze wall". You didn't make him explore and create new magic skills using his bronze magic but gave him a sword that mimics fate swords and a sacred gear.
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