Review Detail of Mel_Aniv in Behind Their World

The first chap was like a prologue for me. A summary of what happened for since the beginning of their birth. It was okay for me but I suggest to make it more showing rather than just telling it. But ey! It was my problem too in mine..hehe. You can also imagine it as it was played on tv screnes for better insight of your story. 😉 Well suggestions were all suggestions. You are the author nas I am the reader. Good luck in the near future! 🙏