Review Detail of GauravKumar in Grimoire: Atonement of Souls

Newbie author here trying to not be a newbie anymore. Technically this isn't my first story, I have written few short stories as a practice and I am working on another novel other than this one—although that one's put on hold for now 'cause this one's my priority. That being said, it's the first one I'm really serious about. I guess couple of important things to know about this work is that: A) Magic = Tere isn't going to be any sort of system mechanism in this one. Not because I don't like, I do; it's just that I had no idea how to make it unique or intresting. Hence why I went with this route—plain ol' simple urban fantasy. The mechanism of the magic is interesting and diverse (...atleast in my head) B) Plot and world = My plot is going to be slow placed. It won't be going forward at a turtle's speed but still, relatively, it will be on the slower end of the spectrum. The world and all its parts will be explained in the story. That being said, for the first 3 arcs atleast the story will be set ok earth in a fictional town within India (so my MC and few of the casts are indians) 3) Characters = This is where the main stuff is. I like to believe that a lot of my focus and plot movement revolves around characters like their interactions, developments, personal arcs. There's a lot of focus on the internal and external struggles of the characters. Other than that, my update schedule is mostly going to be 5 chaps/week, more depending on the scene but definitely not less. And each will be around the range of 1-1.5k words. My plan for now is to have thr first arc to be set free (which definitely going to be around 30 chaps or 40k words) and have it be paywalled later. In the end, all I'll say is that is give my story a try. Read it, think about it and tell me what you feel about it through comments or reviews. Your support would mean a lot and if not the support, your constructive criticism would be a big help too. Thank you for taking the time to read this and hope you like the story 😁