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Prohane_Oulak
Prohane_OulakLv123yr
2021-06-11 04:14

Waste of time, I endured till 18 ch in hope It will get better but unfortunately..... Check for yourself if you patience enough. Nothing personal author-san but you have to creat a few books before starting posting something here.

The Insurrection of the Inept Hero

MonarchX
4.3
143 Chs

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Bored_into_sub
Bored_into_subLv4

it takes time for a book to pick up so you dropped harry potter or lord of the rings on chapter 18 too or everything else you read that isnt super over powered mc right off the bat and constant combat with no story or world development???

3yr
Prohane_Oulak
Prohane_OulakLv12

xD if this was only about plot I would try read it to at least 100 ch before making review but it isn't. Reading "this" I was questioning my intelligence sorry but I felt like this was targeted to children not more mature audience . For a first try to creat something this is it maybe good but not good enought of my time 😉

Bored_into_sub:it takes time for a book to pick up so you dropped harry potter or lord of the rings on chapter 18 too or everything else you read that isnt super over powered mc right off the bat and constant combat with no story or world development???
3yr
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xzyan
xzyanLv12

So far everything is going pretty well, both sides (Nero, aka. Naoko and the King/other heroes) has been giving enough detail on whats happening. Writing Quality- Although somethings get kinda repetitive, the quality is still pretty good, up to my standards, its alright. Stability of Updates- The author updates this story quite often, I feel satisfied for this part so far. Story Development- This story is more fast paced and if you don't like fast paced then I don't think you should read it; but for me I like it, fast paced stories are my thing. Character Design- The author doesn't fail for designing his characters. So far, every time we have a new character arrive the author explains them in detail, doe sometimes I feel like he does get a bit lazy but I also get lazy in my writing so I really have no complains in this section. World Background- Although the author focuses more on the character development and story/plot, the world background are explained little by little. It is not like some novels where they explain the whole world in one chapter. The author gives us details about the world in some chaps and not other while making things clear and understanding. Overall, for my preferences, I give this novel 5/5 so far. I'm really liking how things are going so far. Every thing is going smoothly for me so far, I hope to see more great things in the future.

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Michael_Uzoho
Michael_UzohoLv14

Reveal spoiler

4yr
GreenScreen
GreenScreenLv1

Honest review (Ignore the rating) Also, pin this author. Alright, where should I start? The writing quality is fine. A few grammar mistakes here and there, but it's readable. Updates are perfect and sometimes go on a hiatus but that's fine since all authors do that. The story pace is perfect, though it leans on the accelerated part a bit. The designs of the characters are alright and the world background is gradually explained at a pace you are able to understand. In my opinion, I say this is a great novel. The first few chapters (Probably around 30 chapters) are very meh, but they provide handy information. After that, the story gets better from there. That's pretty much it... Also, the smut chapters are very enjoyable... if you know what I mean...

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drotis
drotisLv15

this just is a copy of shield hero, it even copies all the essentials of the anime, hero has useless class and can't defeat anyone so he gets a slave that likes him and helps him kill things to level up, but people hate him because he offended the king's daughter, ( or in this case the king ). and then at the last part that I saw of shield hero, he awakens a demonic power that uses his rage

4yr
MonarchX
MonarchXAuthor

Shameless Review, I know. I'll give myself a 1 star later but anywaaaaay... Reviews are appreciated no matter what they are, they help me improve my writing Aaaaand that's it... So...

4yr
Tomas_Gallagher
Tomas_GallagherLv15

Basicly shield hero with more revenge MC is from the way does things a nieve b17ch Didnt really enjoy it though it might be better for some younger readers 12-14

4yr
Hyper_Nova07
Hyper_Nova07Lv3

What i am about to write... doesn't necessarily mean i say its bad ar something just that it hurts my head a little...you should read the novel regardless and form your opinion..as i am sure that it's rating maybe isn't only for show and my opinion might even be wrong and i am missing something... Now Then Man... anything just doesn't make sense to me ..in this novel... Mc was supposed to lose humanity..or something but actually other than race change there were no side effects.. he is just a typical mc.. is he some hero of justice ??? ,he helps everyone he sees bullied...and shit like that..?? i wouldn't have any problem with these settings if the mc wasn't shown to be like a broken guy...also that the author created such a drama about him losing humanity ...He ate the DEVIL'S FRUIT surely other than race change (that too only in name..) there must be some side effects.. Right??? NO.. Nothing ... sigh* Also....dude just how many skills,classes and abilities are there?? everyone's stats and mana also over 1000000s..like you can't even remember all of the skills and abilities...and other things (DON'T BLAME MY LOW IQ...ok... just don't.... its definitely not my problem..no jokes*) Many times you won't even know where the fight is happening...cuz mc and his new poke...i mean partner fight in an inn..that too a low class inn ..lot of cliches too..well that's not the main problem as they don't go far beyond by brain capacity many stupid things...like the mc wastes his time during the fight ice guy where he could gave died if ice guys sister interviened and his sister didn't even kill the mc...who i am sure will be a future problem for her...typical The joseph guy..could have caught the mc but didn't even chase..i mean ok he might have thought that the opposite party is only hostile to others not him... should atleast have captured him..or tried...( I don't think tht the mc could have escaped..due to a power level difference of what..over 900..cough* cough* i mean over 500+...levels? The Mc looks for slaves..which i thought he did because he can't trust any one but Noooo...he just freed them..to gain their TRUST He should have learned that he cannot trust others...cuz he got ditches by the king..and all....but no.. His.. childhood friend...well just forget her Ohhh Right....he has a system...which probably everyone forgot by now atleast i only remembered during writing ( AGAIN DON'T QUESTION MY IQ)....theres a lot but my head will...blast

4yr
whadip
whadipLv4

Brain dead mc. Simp. low iq. Equivalent of a twelve year old with mental issues. Hypocritical to a fault. Contradicts himself. the list goes on. Overall he's a trashy character. He was bullied so what do you expect, all these so called bully victims who don't help themselves or at least try to are worse than their bullies and the people who watch and do nothing. What should one expect from someone with the strength of character to not help himself and wants everything on a diamond plate. He's trash, story is trash, everything is trash. It has some good points but ....the mc ruins it all.

3yr
Team_Chaos
Team_ChaosLv13

I do not mean that this is a bad novel by any means, and you could say the author only used it for inspiration, but its just like a carbon copy of “The Rise Of The Sheild Hero” (on CrunchyRoll) Way to many similarities. but good novel dispite that. The low grade is only because or the unmistakable similaritys.

4yr
DeadSoil
DeadSoilLv13

The best part of this novel was when I stopped reading and deleted this novel of my library.................................................

3yr
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