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MonarchX
MonarchXAuthor4yr
2021-02-20 05:01

Shameless Review, I know. I'll give myself a 1 star later but anywaaaaay... Reviews are appreciated no matter what they are, they help me improve my writing Aaaaand that's it... So...

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Samuel_Morrison
Samuel_MorrisonLv2

discord?

MonarchX
MonarchXAuthor

Link to discord is at bottom of synopsis Or just click on my profile and the link is also there

Samuel_Morrison:discord?
Rayoub_sk
Rayoub_skLv14

the story is good but you need to work on your writing . ex : i'd = i would , not i had and even with that it doesn t make sense to use had+ present . and there are other things but yeah .

Rayoub_sk
Rayoub_skLv14

like you should say: i moved not i'd move i started not i'd start

Rayoub_sk:the story is good but you need to work on your writing . ex : i'd = i would , not i had and even with that it doesn t make sense to use had+ present . and there are other things but yeah .
Daoistcxho3f
Daoistcxho3fLv2

can you continue the assassins concentration in another world novel?

The_Starters
The_StartersLv1

Hello author. I just wanna say this plz don't make a big harem.. it's good that he has few girls who loves but don't make it big. it just makes the story worse.... except that I love the story, keep it up👍👍😁😁

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Michael_Uzoho
Michael_UzohoLv14
Hyper_Nova07
Hyper_Nova07Lv3

What i am about to write... doesn't necessarily mean i say its bad ar something just that it hurts my head a little...you should read the novel regardless and form your opinion..as i am sure that it's rating maybe isn't only for show and my opinion might even be wrong and i am missing something... Now Then Man... anything just doesn't make sense to me ..in this novel... Mc was supposed to lose humanity..or something but actually other than race change there were no side effects.. he is just a typical mc.. is he some hero of justice ??? ,he helps everyone he sees bullied...and shit like that..?? i wouldn't have any problem with these settings if the mc wasn't shown to be like a broken guy...also that the author created such a drama about him losing humanity ...He ate the DEVIL'S FRUIT surely other than race change (that too only in name..) there must be some side effects.. Right??? NO.. Nothing ... sigh* Also....dude just how many skills,classes and abilities are there?? everyone's stats and mana also over 1000000s..like you can't even remember all of the skills and abilities...and other things (DON'T BLAME MY LOW IQ...ok... just don't.... its definitely not my problem..no jokes*) Many times you won't even know where the fight is happening...cuz mc and his new poke...i mean partner fight in an inn..that too a low class inn ..lot of cliches too..well that's not the main problem as they don't go far beyond by brain capacity many stupid things...like the mc wastes his time during the fight ice guy where he could gave died if ice guys sister interviened and his sister didn't even kill the mc...who i am sure will be a future problem for her...typical The joseph guy..could have caught the mc but didn't even chase..i mean ok he might have thought that the opposite party is only hostile to others not him... should atleast have captured him..or tried...( I don't think tht the mc could have escaped..due to a power level difference of what..over 900..cough* cough* i mean over 500+...levels? The Mc looks for slaves..which i thought he did because he can't trust any one but Noooo...he just freed them..to gain their TRUST He should have learned that he cannot trust others...cuz he got ditches by the king..and all....but no.. His.. childhood friend...well just forget her Ohhh Right....he has a system...which probably everyone forgot by now atleast i only remembered during writing ( AGAIN DON'T QUESTION MY IQ)....theres a lot but my head will...blast

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