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Rayne_Rue
Rayne_RueLv112yr
2022-04-04 18:38

Love the title I guess this book is going to be amazing please start typing this book asap can't wait to read the up coming chapters ........

The thing we can't reach

Bk1010
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Bk1010
Bk1010Author

Yeahhhh... i know i am reviewing my own freakin book:) anyways what i want to say is... if you really like this book, if you REALLY like it then please add it to you library. Anyways thanks for checking it out:)

3yr

Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4

I will be honest, there are few edits and finishing touches that has to be done. You have potential and I know you will still grow along the way. Read more about metaphoric and poetic narrations and you will get some insight about them. Study about sentence flow and sentence sequence. There are many guides on internet. All in all, a very promising work! I gotta say I'm inpressed! With talented author, this novel was in good hands!

3yr
Daoistuej3zb
Daoistuej3zbLv1

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3yr
DaoisteYr8vs
DaoisteYr8vsLv1

This is truly a great book , i love the way it's written and the story is so fascinating , you are really talented and there is so much more you can and will achieve . Keep it up.

3yr
Madyan_wani
Madyan_waniLv10

This book is gonna be a lit. The work speaks of efforts of author. It is a worth reading book. The synopsis and plot are [img=recommend]. I love the pacing and world characters writer built up.[img=update][img=recommend]

3yr
Micheal_Kebede
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3yr
Aeipathy_02
Aeipathy_02Lv11

This story has an interesting start. I found the names and title unique which is a great plus since this adds to my addition words. Now for review proper, Writing quality: well there are some g-errors but it didn't much hinder you from reading. Stability of Updates. Well I know for a story to liven up, you need every time to write each chapter. So just take your time. Though I look forward to see this one grow more chaps. Story Development: The opening was great. A conflict among those who is on power already set the mood for the story. The war of warlords seems interesting too. Character Design: The characters were detailed and absolutely alive. I find the princess personality likable too. The dialogues between characters are smooth too. World Background. Greatly written. Overall this book is a great read already and addition to my collections. I look forward for more updates. Keep it up Author!

3yr
Bisrat_K_Dessalegn
Bisrat_K_DessalegnLv1

This is really an amazing work!! I am so proud of you. Keep up the good work. [img=recommend][img=recommend] cant wait for the next chapter.

3yr
Andrew_Oak
Andrew_OakLv2

Good start and fast development of events. Clear and attentive detailing of the world and descriptions of the characters are pleasant to read. I hope to meet an unexpected storyline turn and get a strong impression. Good luck author. thanks for the fantasy.

3yr
Dani6
Dani6Lv14

The history of another country is always truly interesting, showing the mistakes of the past. Humans are human no matter where they are. The story mixes in nicely, forming the plot. Keep on writing!

3yr
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