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Mel_Aniv
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2021-02-11 17:45

I will be honest, there are few edits and finishing touches that has to be done. You have potential and I know you will still grow along the way. Read more about metaphoric and poetic narrations and you will get some insight about them. Study about sentence flow and sentence sequence. There are many guides on internet. All in all, a very promising work! I gotta say I'm inpressed! With talented author, this novel was in good hands!

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Mel_Aniv
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BTW, I am from review swap.....please vote my work The Grandmaster's Rebirth tomorrow okay? If you have something to spare............

Bk1010
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O******ww nice for telling me... I'm really thankful:)

Bk1010
Bk1010Author

Of course i remember and i will check it out. i will leave it in my library for now but when i finish my exams i will check it out

Mel_Aniv:BTW, I am from review swap.....please vote my work The Grandmaster's Rebirth tomorrow okay? If you have something to spare............
Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4

Thanks!

Bk1010:Of course i remember and i will check it out. i will leave it in my library for now but when i finish my exams i will check it out
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