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Bakuretsu
BakuretsuLv103yr
2021-07-12 15:56

Poor writing quality. Terrible world building. No character description. The story feels like an MTL, obviously written by someone who doesn't have a good grasp of the English language. The only thing I can recommend to the author: Please read other high quality books, the only way to improve your writing is to read, English books.

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Completely concur, idk how this story has so many solid reviews

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ranmaro
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Welcome to my new novel :D This is my eighth project here, and so I would like to state the pros and cons so you would know what you are going to read. I will narrate them together, as some pros for me might be cons for you :) 1. Per my habit, I plan my novels pretty much before writing. I usually focus on the main plot, subplots, and main character profiles. So, you can read without worrying about the novel structure or plot holes. 2. My books are always divided into trilogy, and the each book of the trilogy would range between 300 to 500 chapters. 3. I write fast, publish all my writings without stockpiling. So publishing two chapters is my minimum limit, and usually I prefer to publish up to five daily at my new novels. 4. I have an editor working on my writings, plus couple of famous editing tools used to make my chapters look as neat as possible. My editor will work on this novel from the start, after contracting it ofc, so the quality won't disappoint you after getting contracted. 5. This is a story based on many characters, so you will find many chapters speaking about characters other than MC. 6. The Mc isn't cold hearted, as he will make friends with benefit and form his own group. 7. It's an academy story, yet some arcs will occur outside the academy later on. 8. There is harem, and I plan to make it a moderate size one. 9. There will be R-18 scenes, not too frequent but any chapter containing so will be marked by (R-18) warning in the title. I plan to make R-18 scenes not exceeding 5% of the entire novel. 10. I always listen to any comment or critique as long as it's written in good manner. Not a fan of deleting comments or reviews except for those pretty much offensive ones. Have a thought or doubt anytime, just feel free to post it and I will answer you in a day. 11. This novel is written to be contracted, and I usually lock chapters around chapter 60. 12. I never drop my novels, so read freely and with much ease regarding this issue. Finally I hope you like my new baby here and show her support and care. Thanks for reading my novel :)

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