Welcome to my new novel :D This is my eighth project here, and so I would like to state the pros and cons so you would know what you are going to read. I will narrate them together, as some pros for me might be cons for you :) 1. Per my habit, I plan my novels pretty much before writing. I usually focus on the main plot, subplots, and main character profiles. So, you can read without worrying about the novel structure or plot holes. 2. My books are always divided into trilogy, and the each book of the trilogy would range between 300 to 500 chapters. 3. I write fast, publish all my writings without stockpiling. So publishing two chapters is my minimum limit, and usually I prefer to publish up to five daily at my new novels. 4. I have an editor working on my writings, plus couple of famous editing tools used to make my chapters look as neat as possible. My editor will work on this novel from the start, after contracting it ofc, so the quality won't disappoint you after getting contracted. 5. This is a story based on many characters, so you will find many chapters speaking about characters other than MC. 6. The Mc isn't cold hearted, as he will make friends with benefit and form his own group. 7. It's an academy story, yet some arcs will occur outside the academy later on. 8. There is harem, and I plan to make it a moderate size one. 9. There will be R-18 scenes, not too frequent but any chapter containing so will be marked by (R-18) warning in the title. I plan to make R-18 scenes not exceeding 5% of the entire novel. 10. I always listen to any comment or critique as long as it's written in good manner. Not a fan of deleting comments or reviews except for those pretty much offensive ones. Have a thought or doubt anytime, just feel free to post it and I will answer you in a day. 11. This novel is written to be contracted, and I usually lock chapters around chapter 60. 12. I never drop my novels, so read freely and with much ease regarding this issue. Finally I hope you like my new baby here and show her support and care. Thanks for reading my novel :)

50 chapters in and this novel reads like it was written in a different language and then machine translated into english with some editing. This shows in specific areas like where the author says something to the effect of “I did no felony to you” to which the other person responds with something like “You did do a felony to me.” There are plenty more examples like the MC being called a “Lamp” abruptly in the first few chapters with little explanation of what that is. I suspect the author meant “guide” or “scout.” Story is quite unclear (in an unintentional way) with the author trying to introduce new elements (characters, details, thoughts) without explaining them (just throwing them in there). Dropped with no regrets, the positive reviews seem suspicious as this novel is nowhere near 4+ stars. Maybe a 3 at most.

At the beginning i got little disappointed because the first chapters felt a little rushed and confusing, and MCs personality changed too fast (from careless, naive and even a little fearful to calm and confident). However, after a few chapters, not only it gets really captivating, but the pace gets better. And the fights are very delightful to read when won by the use of strategy instead of raw strenght.

Writing needs an editor URGENTLY. I have nothing to say about the stability of releases, I started reading and the story already has more than 100 cap. Development is abrupt and without much explanation of why things happen. Character development, well, the characters are presented, their races are spoken but not described of their traits, they (including MC) only exist and act without explaining why or how they became so (everything will be explained later "and so the explanation is pushed with the belly "). The backgrounds of the worlds look good, but not many are explained (again).

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The story has a good lore behind it the the writing quality makes me not want to read it. It's not rare to read a nonsensical sentence and have to guess what the author is trying to portray. The character design for the MC is pretty decent, Sometimes he acts like a spoiled brat but it's not a dealbreaker for the story. He's written to be a person who's pretty smart but at times he act like a complete idiot with no inductive reasoning. What I hate about the story is every other character. The character is decently OP considering his past, yet still every fight all his allies are sh*ting bricks scared outta there minds even though MC constantly wins easily either through brute strength or good planning. At some point. Everyone has some type of trust issue. His slaves/servants fail to believe he can win his fights even though he constantly wins. He doesn't trust the voice in his head and constantly questions the old man in his head. Just an overall annoying story to read. But I also don't want to drop reading it since it seems like it could have good potential

The storyline has potential but the grammar messes up the story. I read a couple chapters to see if the author will improve his/her writing. But my expectations turned up to be a failure 😔👎.

Poor writing quality. Terrible world building. No character description. The story feels like an MTL, obviously written by someone who doesn't have a good grasp of the English language. The only thing I can recommend to the author: Please read other high quality books, the only way to improve your writing is to read, English books.

ima juat leave this here amd say it's good aa it is now in the future since its still new maybe more back ground info amd some stuff feels kinda forced but over all good for now maybe we'll see alittle depth in the future