Review Detail of lstreader in Slime in the Modern World

I'm gonna be cliche and do a shameless author review. Anyways, this is my second book I've written. I'm still in school, so I don't know when I'll get around to updating this. If you have any ideas for the novel or any tips let me know I'm always willing to improve. Ohhhh also, if anyone think this is good and wants to do the cover art for me that would be hella cool. (Just wait until I'm more chapters in to get a good grasp on what to draw).