Everything is almost perfect! Only the world background needs a little work. Advice to author: Flesh out the world a little more. Write some more lore on it. Describe peoples clothing, food, way of living, architecture, economy, money system and other stuff. Also avoid using words like T-Rex, until and unless you want to introduce dinosaurs as canon monsters (that can be good idea). Finally, keep up the good work. I just gifted you balloon. This is my first gift to an author and you deserve it. Kudos!
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