Review Detail of val_the_mysterious in Infinite Immortal Murder

The first chapter did a good job of pulling you in and it's exactly what you think immortality would be like. I feel for the mc living that long. Yeah, there is a lot of things you can do, but after a couple of hundred years, it's all just on permanent repeat. The world building is good so far, some of the second chapter seems rushed but it's not necessarily a bad thing. There are a few places where the wrong word is used/misspelled. Nothing that distracts from full immersion and nothing that a once over later won't fix. Overall, good story so far. Keep up the good work!